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Storia di un burattino (Story of a Puppet)

Ok, something different. Pinocchio was my favourite story when i was a kid. I remember i got really frightened when i saw the whale scene :P

This is really different from what i do, we can say im just.. "experimenting".

Also, this is a drawing for :iconketchuphouse:´s fanzine.

Hope you like it.

Art © =just-a-CreEp
Pinocchio © Carlo Collodi

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:iconxmaikux:
The point of interest in the picture is portrayed really well, the mouth opening about to swallow him, and the use of contrast to depict detail rather than just areas of light and dark are the best thing this illustration has got going for it. Wonderful work.

Uhm i dunno what to say on improvement, i guess if you were trying to make pinnochio really stand out as much as the whale, emphasizing on him a bit more and less on the waves might help that out But it's not like i'm saying the waves are drawing out attention at all.

Ah i'm not good at giving critiques... but i haven't given one in awhile i hope i didn't tick you off.
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:iconxmaikux:
hahaha wonderful, captures the very climax of the story.
:iconthequietwriter:
That's one frightening whale. I think that part always disturbed me in the movie as a kid.

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:iconjust-a-creep:
me too! that´s why i picked that one.

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:iconyoshiky:
Se ve bien el punto de vista de la imagen y lo de las sombras, pero las ballenas no tienen dientes.

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Disfruta la tranquilidad del bosque. (Enjoy the tranquility of the forest)
98% of teenagers do or has tried drugs. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
Sorry for my english. ^-^ pero prefiero el ¡ESPAÑOL!
:iconmilantela:
Está demasiado bueno, me sorprendió :)

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My line sucks...

Lactobacillus rhamnosus are my friends...
:iconexecoot:
Todo se ve genial, excepto por los dientes de la ballena como mencionaron allá arriba, pero sigue siendo awesome.

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devianTARD is full of faggots. I am not the exception.
:iconmikafu:
omg. truly amazing! :)

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what a waste of time! shouldn't you be pursuing your dreams?!
:iconbledroses:
i have to say i was more affraid of them all turning into donkeys... i like whales... haha

but that movie gave my child hood real depth... i learned never to trust puppets! they want to be real people!
:iconhatred-reverie:
Fuck--- Esa ballena era malévola! Malévola te digo!

Que bacán que puedas experimentar, talvez adaptes algunas técnicas nuevas--- Siga experimentanto!

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:iconjust-a-creep:
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